tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-648326883989508055.post7878067708857621328..comments2024-03-26T18:07:42.517-06:00Comments on Books and Benches: Working with an Editor: Thoughts and DialogueMK McClintockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15140830185509209100noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-648326883989508055.post-50304156779975247402014-02-25T21:22:01.527-07:002014-02-25T21:22:01.527-07:00I agree. Consistency is one thing my editor really...I agree. Consistency is one thing my editor really looks for, and isn't afraid to tell me when something's not. I hadn't thought about the number of internal thoughts I was using, but when someone is pointing it out, the little comments really start to pile up! :) Good comment about the dialogue bringing more immediacy - I completely agree. Thanks, Kristy! MK McClintockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15140830185509209100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-648326883989508055.post-77384083218400360022014-02-25T18:32:26.198-07:002014-02-25T18:32:26.198-07:00Great post MK. I think an author should just remai...Great post MK. I think an author should just remain consistent with whatever format they follow. I like some internal thought. I've no doubt that when I write I have too much. Hopefully this gets scaled down during editing. But I also hope that readers will forgive if I run on about something. I know if I love a book I'll overlook such things. Nobody's perfect. And I've worked harder to get more dialogue into my writing, because it definitely brings more immediacy to the story.Kristy McCaffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17363740420272046549noreply@blogger.com