Homesteaders struggle to establish
ranches in Central California in the 1870s, amid earthquakes, drought,
banditos, remoteness and human failing. Young Virginia Nugent’s privileged life
ends with the death of her mother and her father’s guilt-ridden descent into
addiction. She is conflicted in her love of the ranch and her desire to escape
until an old cowhand’s loyalty and a Southerner friend of her late mother offer
hope that she can change her destiny.
“Return
to the past in this exciting Western saga…well researched and finely written
historical novel. Schroeder has a knack for placing her readers directly in the
path of stampeding horses so that we smell their animal sweat, taste the grit
of the dust, and envision the beauty of the land that surrounds us.”
—Velda Brotherton, Author of Rowena’s
Hellion
Western
Historical or Romance?
with Anne Schroeder
Like chocolate and peanut butter,
historical romance is a hybrid that takes a zany female and sets her among real
historical figures, times and events where the West is actually a main
character. Confusing? Here’s a paragraph I wrote for Cholama Moon to
make the reader “feel” the character of the area:
.
With the first
rumble, a piece of shale broke loose from Middle Ridge and tumbled down. Other
pieces followed. In a nearby meadow a field mouse raised its head and scurried,
wide-eyed, to hide beneath a rotten log. The shaking grew harder. A manzanita
bush growing alongside the trail began to quiver and a meadowlark on its
branches took flight. A tree squirrel hesitated, then darted up the trunk and
disappeared into the tallest branches of a valley oak. For two minutes the
earth buckled and groaned, the tall pines swayed, dust exploded from freshly
formed fissures and Middle Ridge grew half an inch.
In Cholama Moon, Ginny Nugent
begins her misadventures as a 12-year-old with a craving to find a family amid
the harshness of her life. She’s a lovable brat who doesn’t even know what
she’s lacking until her worst nightmare comes riding in to upset her life.
After that she’s on a whirlwind adventure through early California.
The peanut butter part comes with the
story need that builds to romance. Here’s an early paragraph from Cholama
Moon:
“She’ll be comin’ round the mountain when
she comes. She’ll be comin’ round the mountain when she comes…” Ginny climbed
from her bed and shivered in the early morning chill of the unfinished loft. It
was quieter than downstairs and she could hide without worrying that she’d be
in anybody’s way if Patrón was drinking, or if he had a headache afterwards.
Through the opening in the wall that he intended for a window if he ever got
around to finishing it, she watched the sun rising on the other side of the
mountains. The butterball sun on its way to a fresh day made her forget about
singing. With a sigh, she started over again. “She’ll be comin’ round the
mountain when she comes. She’ll be comin’ round the mountain when she comes…”
She kept her singing to a whisper while she sounded out the words the way her
mama had sung them—words about driving six white horses and somebody killing
the old red rooster. She’d never seen six white horses all in one place, only
the stallion that pranced like a dancer when Miguelito rode it in the yard. But
she knew about dead roosters. She and Sancho killed them whenever the cook
needed fresh meat for supper.
She liked the song because it was about a real family and with real families,
one day her mama might come riding in, big as she pleased, and her dying would
just be a mistake.
I’m President-Elect of Women Writing the
West and I write inspirational romance about the woman’s story. If you love the
genre and want to take a peek, check me out on Amazon
and Goodreads .
About the Author
Anne Schroeder writes about the West in
short stories, essays and two memoirs, Ordinary Aphrodite and Branches
on the Conejo. Cholama Moon is her first published novel. The second novel
in the series, Maria Ines, will be released later in 2014, both by Oak
Tree Press.
She is President-Elect of Women Writing
the West and chair of the LAURA Short Fiction Contest. She and husband Steve
and their two dogs recently moved from Central California to Southern Oregon in
search of new adventure.
A screenwriter gave her great advice: Say it in two sentences or less, eat lots
of
red
licorice, network with unlikely people on their way up and produce quality
stuff with
no personal drama.
Anne, what a charming comparison of your work to the mix of chocolate and peanut butter. As you know, I thoroughly enjoyed your book and think your writing is as near to perfection as anyone gets. You put the reader on sight until they feel they have become one of the characters. I'm sharing this on my FB page so everyone I know can see how talented you are.
ReplyDeleteI also liked this comparison, Velda. Thank you for stopping by the blog to visit Anne!
DeleteI am honored by your praise, Velda. I work hard to become "readable" because in these hectic times it's a crime to ask readers to invest precious hours on less than the best.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great way to look at things, Anne. Readers' time is precious!
DeleteAnne, a protagonist in search of family sounds like a great set-up for a story. I look forward to meeting you at conference in Golden Co.
ReplyDeleteMe, too. I think we have met at a prior conference. WWW is full of fabulous faces. Thanks for dropping by.
DeleteI look forward to revisiting the West with Ginny. Can feel the rumble and taste that rising dust already!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Nancy, for the comment and the kind words.
DeleteWomen Writing the West is a good organization. I was a member when writing my two historical western romances.
ReplyDeleteI'll check out your books. You should come back to us and reconnect.
DeletePeanut butter and chocolate! For those of us new to the west, this como is the perfect way to make the history go down easily and stick. Looking forward to reading about Ginny's adventures.
ReplyDeleteThanks, notestomymuses. I agree.
DeleteI have to go get a piece of chocolate now (and maybe eat with a spoonful of almond butter)! Great analogy. I love it. I'm looking forward to reading Cholama Moon!
ReplyDeleteYour copy is in the mail. Looking forward to your review.
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